Sporistics
The Ice Queen's Sorrow
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By idioticgenuis
01/15/2010 - 02:31:57

Type: Creature
Rating: 0.05 (Not rated)
Tags: ax, divine, fire, godly, guard, holy, ice, king, lord, powerful, queen, sword, weapon, winterwarscontest

Description

1) please remove my ice demon to enter this. 2) please look at my other entries to understand this better. 3) This is the story of the final battle (my version) and it has some graphic details in it. 4)1st page MPN =D----- One day after a bloody battle on the very footsteps of the Ice Palace the queen is examining the damages. All of the defences are gone. None of the fire infantry escaped, but the sky is till red with their presence. Out of nowhere the Fire Lord himself flys to her with his sharp, leather-like wings. Silenced by their hatred for each other, neither one of them speaks. Then the queen makes the first move, she uses her magic to bring a ice pillar up from beneath his feet. He easily avoids it, his wings burnign with flames. He leaps into the air and attacks with his syth, aiming to kill. She parries his blws until her staff is knocked away. Just as the Lord is going to deleiver the final blow there is a screaming figure tackles him. It is the Ice king. Little does he know that the Lord has back-up as well because just as the King is going to stab the Fire Lord, Betrayal Cuts off his hand. Betrayal makes a quick follow-up by kicking him 50 yards away, and presuming him dead. Betrayl, the Fire Lord's only friend, helps the Lord up. They meet eyes and in the one moment of weakness the queen stabs Betrayal through the heart with her staff. When she pulled it out there was a terrible sound. It was so sickening, so terible, SO ENRAGING. The Fire Lord burst into flames, surrounding his entire body.With unbeleiveable speed he flew high into the air. With one disgustingly beautiful arc, he threw his syth at her. Charging after it so he may claim his prize. Then suddenly, the King jumps infront of the blade. It hits him in the shoulder and he slowly pulls it out of himself. With his good hand he swings the syth at the charging Fire Lord cutting his head clean off. Almost instantly after that he fell dead from his wounds. Muttering the words "For my thone, for my k-kingdom, for m-my Qu..." The red then leaves the sky, citisens slowly come out of the bunkers, but the queen kneels in her sorrow. Because even thoguh she was the one to win the war, she had also been the one to lose the most... her naive, misguided brother and her brave, selfless husband...

Details

3350
DNA points
Height
1.88
50 Bones1 Feet1 Hands
Diet: Carnivore
Health: +5
Meanness
27 %
Cuteness
69.91 %
Sociability
12 / 20
Aggressiveness
10 / 20
Abilities
8 / 15
1 / 52 / 50 / 5
3 / 54 / 55 / 5
5 / 54 / 53 / 5
3 / 50 / 5
Comments

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By Orion1004
 

Congratulations, this creation is a Finalist in the Ice Hero category in Winter Wars! You can download your trophy from my page and display it on yours if you wish.

By Conorak
 

Good story, good creations and just genrally good well done man.

By tuinahvuni
 

Your story and this creation are simply amazing! Very well done! Fantastic set of entries!

By Ex1111
 

SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!

By 94Brandon14
 

Wow! Amazing job! You are a great creator!

By zzzzzap
 

Thats sad,Yet awesome!

By Hawk3y394
 

great pose and story, R+

By geko21
 

ya i thought you couldnt change the color eather it must be a glitch beacuse in editor its normal

By Srarlight
 

Wow very cool!!! this is also very well made and designed!

By Quaizor
 

great pose, I like the details and the colour as well.

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