By stinger771
 

and you know get used to the tools a little more, but personally i like this one

By stinger771
 

haha yeah its your adventure dud just so long as you like it it doesn't matter, i just cant wait for the next one haha. but if some of the problems really bother ya maybe you could try makign a couple other adventures before goin on to part 2?

By stinger771
 

Oh and i really like the way you made the city too : )

By stinger771
 

dude that was an awesome adventure! i cant wait for the next installment and good idea attaching that machine gun effect to your vehicles for fighting the epic!!

By codyr2391
 

I found myself talking to someone out of order causes inconsistencies in the story line.

By codyr2391
 

ok heres the deal, I like where you're going with this story, very cool and the scenery is lifelike and intriguing. But you have to fix all the grammar. Also break up the goals into more acts so you can't complete them before you should.

By codyr2391
 

Hey I fixed it and can login! I will play this right away. Also I have a new mission ready to go, a V2 of activate the ship called The SS Utopia. Its awesome I promise.

By codyr2391
 

How can I play? the game won't even let me login! I'm so mad. Sorry