By WolfWhisperer
01/22/2011 - 01:43:50
Type: Creature
Rating: 0.33 (Not rated)
Description
MPN #7 1/22/11
The scent of her, is so invigorating! My mouth waters as she walks down the dark alley. She doesn't notice me yet, this is my chance.
I sneak into the dark shadows, keeping my breathing down to a low. I stop and check my distance, making sure I'm not too close. I begin approaching her, suddenly she turns around. I freeze. She turns back around flipping her hair over her shoulders. She walks to the end of the alley and looks around as if she's waiting for someone.
She walks back and forth constantly looking at her phone. I stay where I'm at, curious of what she's doing. A rat begins crawling on my back. I pick up the rat and throw it off. It squeaks and runs off. When I look back at the girl, she is kissing someone. I guess that's what she was waiting for.
I let out a small growl to show I'm here. They break apart and look down the alley. i jump at them, taking them by surprise. The man pushes the girl towards me and runs off screaming. She falls to the ground, cutting up her arms on some broken bottles. Blood immediately runs down her arms. The scent fills the air, it smells so good. (I will finish this story sometime, i'm tired of typing so it is unfinished now)
2925DNA points
 |  |  |
| 39 Bones | 4 Feet | 0 Hands |
Diet: Carnivore
Health: +322.6 %
| Sociability 7 / 20 | Aggressiveness 8 / 20 | Abilities 4 / 15 |
|---|---|---|
 2 / 5 |  5 / 5 |  0 / 5 |
 0 / 5 |  3 / 5 |  0 / 5 |
 5 / 5 |  0 / 5 |  4 / 5 |
 0 / 5 |  0 / 5 |
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Epic!
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My fave of yours...fantasticly creepy!
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