By 97marcs
 

you need not to delete it, my first adventures were very much worse.

By 97marcs
 

you made it good, but the story is not very interesting. Cou could something do for example speaking with other characters. :)

By 95Razor73
 

since it has a yellow face now, i'll leave it here. for now.

By 95Razor73
 

since noone likes this i'll delete it soon. I'll try to improve my skills on this. Sincerely, 9573